*nods* Yeah, first person POV is annoyingly hard to get right in fanfic!
I do indeed find the concept of Smokey going to find out what happened entertaining. *hopes he ends up having accidental hot sex with Blades, possibly with Swindle sandwiched between* (Swindle-flavoured sandwich is the best kind of sandwich)
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Date: 2011-03-20 03:59 pm (UTC)I do indeed find the concept of Smokey going to find out what happened entertaining. *hopes he ends up having accidental hot sex with Blades, possibly with Swindle sandwiched between* (Swindle-flavoured sandwich is the best kind of sandwich)