Thanks for giving me this feedback, it's very helpful, and I'm enjoying working on the plot.
I also disagree with First Aid. I think if some of the others had 'attractions' for each other then that may have made a difference. I also think First Aid had a bee in his bonnet and a lot of this was about 'showing' Ratchet how in control of everything he was. Only to have it all 'give way' of course, and for him to go right over the top - in a somewhat 'inappropriate' way, LOL. I'm a sucker for illicit affairs, too XD
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Date: 2011-03-20 10:10 am (UTC)I also disagree with First Aid. I think if some of the others had 'attractions' for each other then that may have made a difference. I also think First Aid had a bee in his bonnet and a lot of this was about 'showing' Ratchet how in control of everything he was. Only to have it all 'give way' of course, and for him to go right over the top - in a somewhat 'inappropriate' way, LOL. I'm a sucker for illicit affairs, too XD
As for Blades - he'll be fine. Eventually :P