Finally got a chance to read this and I really liked it! I am intrigued and will keep my eye out for the rest >:3

I think my favorite thing here is Brawl, just so cute and not bright but going along with things regardless. Trying to keep Vortex appeased! <3333 goodness knows I wouldn't want that temper turned on me either. Brawlll <333 I want to give him hugs.

(also I rather enjoy Blast Off and Onslaught essentially being the parents, planning things over everyone else's heads. That's awesome!)