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Artemis ([personal profile] artemis10002000) wrote in [personal profile] ayngelcat 2011-03-26 05:39 pm (UTC)

That's a wonderful insight into First Aid's character. I love how much depth you give him within the confines of this short story, there are so many layers to everything he says and does and even thinks. His theory for making the gestalt function is very intriguing as well, though it doesn't seem to be working. This story has made me look forward to reading more about First Aid.

I felt sorry all the way through reading this for poor Blades, though!

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